Oneshot - Waiting for Ghosts

[ryunuka]

Title: Waiting for Ghosts
Pairing: MaruDa (yikes no RyoDa, what's wrong with me! :P)
Genre: General, AU
Rating: PG
Summary: A quiet coffee shop and an absent co-owner in a picture frame by the cash register...
A/N: I figured at take a shot at writing some pairings other than RyoDa but I can't really not write about Ueda now can I? I'm not stepping away

Comments

W o n d e r f u l.

[lonely_heartz]

Amazing! ^^
I really like it!
This has got to be one of the best MARUDA fics out there! ♥

...the way you wrote it gives off this sense of.. this feeling of.. something.. i can't quite name it.

Tranquility?! Maybe?! It's soothing and gentle and I love it! Like I've said before, I really like variety (a vacation from RYODA) Hehe. I love it! ^^ It's very different from the usual *feeling* that Ryoda fics give off and sometimes, that's exactly what I need!

Oooh and while I was reading this.. the picture that came to my head immediately was Tatsuya and Maru in Furano fields... the feeling of being surrounded by BEAUTIFUL flowers!

Thank you so much. This is wonderful! =)

Re: W o n d e r f u l.

[ryunuka]

I'm glad you liked it, and that's kinda the feeling I was going for, I can't really name it either though :P
Thank you lots~! ^_^

Re: W o n d e r f u l.

[lonely_heartz]

I think that your fics are really good in a sense that.. you always make your readers *feel* -- but it's sometimes hard to pinpoint and name exactly the entirety of that *feeling* because they are feelings that are bunched up together!

Indeed, the main feeling is tranquility..and as usual, you portrayed that feeling very well yet again! ^^

I remember reading the last fic you made and I commented about the feeling it gave off and again, you mentioned that that was exactly the feeling that you were aiming for! That makes you a good writer because you always achieve what you set out to do! Kudos to you, hun! ♥

You're welcome! ^^

[roughmetal2]

why is this so beautiful? i'm definitely a ryoda fan but your maruda is so sweet i couldn't help but swoon over it. XD

[ryunuka]

Aww! I'm happy you think my fic is beautiful, -gives you cookies-
Thank you for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[isodia]

I totally totally love this on so many different levels!!!
First of all, I was surprised to see a non-RyoDa fic from you but I'm not complaining since I also adore MaruDa...
Second, while reading this I also had the feeling of anticipation for Ueda's return which I really liked...
Third, their bond and friendship is really love! I really like reading fics wherein it portrays great bond between them-- Ryo, Tat-chan, Jin, Kame, Pi, Junno, Koki and Maru~ *sighs*
Fourth, did I say how much I really really adore and love this fic?!?!?! ♥
great job on this fic!! ^_^
looking forward for more!!

[ryunuka]

Wow, I'm really happy you like it~! I actually really like MaruDa too, but all of my fics until now have insisted on being RyoDa, I love both pairings so I figured I should try and write something other than RyoDa sometimes, glad you like, thank you for reading and commenting~!

[sono_kiseki]

Boo, Ryunuka-senpai~ I wanted to read this finish~ D: but I have to run off for exam. DDDD:

Will read finish when I return. :D In the meantime, snagging this spot~

[ryunuka]

Senpai??? Hontou??? Wow, happy!!!
Lol, good luck on your exam, ganbarre~! ^_^

[sono_kiseki]

*chants* senpai. senpai. senpai. senpai. :D

wow cute story. XD man i want to see/read the part ppl said Ueda and Nakamaru were ghey. :D
if a cafe like that existed... tons of fangirls will pour in everyday and make Tat-chan very, very happy.

. “He smiles at everyone and the practically forget how to drink!”
the practically...? Typo there, senpai. I believe you mean 'they'. :3

[ryunuka]

Yay, I'm a senpai~! :P
I honestly wish there was a cafe like that, I'd lose all my money there :P
And yeah, that was a typo, I did mean 'they', I tried to check for things like that but I guess I missed that one, it was 4am, that's my excuse :P
By the way: http://newshfan.livejournal.com/8814.html
That's a Mini Music Station clip where Koki insists Maru and Ueda are gay because of their trip to Hokkaido (it was 2007, not 2008, my bad...again)
Hope that link works, thanks for reading and commenting, and calling me senpai~! ^_^

[akillarian]

It's very nice. The atmosphere gives me a warm gentle feeling. I wish I can work in that Cafe instead of the Ice Cream shop I used to work at.

About Maru and Ueda, are you referring to the one where they take the trip together to see the Lavender Field and were later teased several time(not just before that show) and were called Lavender Field Boys.

Koki and Ueda are believable too if you squint. I watch Music Station 2009.03.13 ~ FULL SHOW. When KAT-TUN has to sit behind the hosts and listen to the other artists talk, Koki a few time turns around and smiles at Ueda. I don't know Japanese so I don't know if they were smilling at what the artists were saying or they were just really bored. Probably they were just bored, because Ueda at one point makes a pout or a duck mouth shape.

[ryunuka]

Yeah, I watched one the Mini Music Stations from last year when Koki was implying that Maru and Ueda were gay because they went to Hokkaido together, that's probably why Ueda's trip ended up being to Hokkaido in this fic :P
Ueda seems be the one that gets on best with everyone in KAT-TUN ne, Koki always says he is cute too :P
I'm glad you like my fic, thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[akillarian]

Ueda seems be the one that gets on best with everyone in KAT-TUN ne, Koki always says he is cute too :P

This line makes me laugh because when KAT-TUN first form Ueda were one of the members that argue and fight the most a lot. Time has mellow them all and make them more understanding of each other. Yee Koki often says Ueda is cute in magazine :D While Jin sometimes say Ueda is a manly man(not in that exact word). KAT-TN usually says nice thing about Ueda in magazines.