My new family: a Heisei Kumi fanfic (15/16)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Keito/Shoon, with some side Ariyama, Chiitaro, onesidedYamada/Kamiki, onesided Hikato
Rating: R, for violence and dark themes
Genre: A little bit of everything, except smut. No smut, sorry~
Disclaimer: They all own each other. I own nothing~
Summary: Johnny Kitagawa head of the Kitagawa Yakuza Group, dies. Yes, he's dead

Comments

[mayumi_san]

I'm PRESENT!

Normally, I love Shida Mirai, but that was bloody hell annoying. I am furious with her as of this moment.

YAMADA. oh poor dear. Kamiki, I love you and all, but you are so fcked up. HOW DARE HE DO THAT TO YAMADA /sobs

I'm sure Daiki still loves you though- so don't worry~

BUT BUT OH MY GOD WHY KEITO? Why? What about Hikaru?????????

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah, I do actually like Shidai Mirai and Kamiki. Especially Kamiki, he's wonderful. Here however, he's very dark, and messed up.

Poor Yamada is right! I kinda teared up as I was writing that bit. But Daiki is there for him, luckily.

Wow. Keito got a big reaction. What do you mean 'WHY?' Keito never did have romantic feelings for Hikaru. Never through any of it did he get butterflies or find Hikaru amazingly handsome. Sure, he loves Hikaru, but he's not in love with Hikaru; like he is with Shoon. Was that a shock? It wasn't suposed to be...

Thank you for your comment, as always it made my day! This fic is almost over! It's crazy to think about; the next chapter is the last. I hope that you still continue reading my work after the Heisei Kumi. Thank you! *bows*

[mayumi_san]

nah,it wasn't really a shock, knowing Keito's thoughts and all that..its just that I kinda feel sorry for Hikaru... I wanted him to be with Hikaru~ hahahah :)

Hikaru likes him, doesn't he? so what happens to him now?

and I'm looking forward to the end of Heisei Kumi, ryo-chan! of course I'm still going to read your work~ there's still the Ariyama side story and all that, right?

don't worry. <3

update soon!

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah, I kinda feel sorry for him too. But, it could be worse.

Thank you! I am not that good of a writer, so the fact that anyone is reading my work is wonderful, an I'm grateful that you like it.

<3

[geebabbiez]

OMG. I keep seeing this story pop up on my page and I kept meaning to read it, but didn't get around to it until a few days ago.
That being said, I LOVE THIS STORY, YO. O_O
So, the KeitoxShoon.....I love this pairing. It's so hard to find sometimes, and I was ecstatic to find it in your awesome writing. 8D It's not my favorite Shoon pairing, nor my favorite Keito pairing... but it's probably in the top five. xD
Poor Hika. TT^TT I totally love Hikato, but if it's for the sake of KeitoxShoon, well then I'm okay with it. Even if they don't get a happy ending. Dx
So, all in all, awesome plot, I think you did great with turning the boys into 'bad boys', and... I LOVE YOUR WRITING. 8D
Ummm... sorry for rambling. ^^;;

[ryosukekoibito]

Yay! New reader! *glomps* Thank you for getting around to it!
I love KeitoxShoon. It's really hard to find, so I decided to simply write my own.
I love Hikato too. I had a hard time deciding who Keito would end up with for a long time...
I'm glad you like the plot! I was nervous about the whole thing...but it was tons of fun to write, especially making them such 'bad boys'. You like my writing? Thank you so much! I don't have a beta or anything (I don't really understand how that works, and so I simply don't worry about it), so I don't have any feedback before I post. I'm glad my writing isn't horrid (^.^)

Thank you for rambling. I am prone to it myself; and besides, any comment, but especially long comments make me happy!

Thank you for reading! *bows*