Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (16/36)

Jan 17, 2019 23:45


Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area reclaiming that peace starts to feel ( Read more... )

multi-chap: up in smoke

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kei_tea January 18 2019, 06:11:08 UTC

Poor Keito, he passed out so much 🤣 anyway, thank you for posting this, I love reading your story, I hope they all get better soon !

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ryosukekoibito January 18 2019, 06:26:18 UTC
Omigoodness you are so fast! Thank you so much for commenting!!!
Keito has a hard time. All of them need some time to heal, after all of the excitement of the past few days.

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gothunia January 22 2019, 07:31:57 UTC
Thank god Inoo is still breathing at least! This was somewhat a nice change of pace, please give them the time to heal! Now I need to get back to preparing for my exams this week

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ryosukekoibito January 25 2019, 05:18:54 UTC
Yes, he's still alive! They need a rest, a little slowing down will be good for them.

Good luck with your exams darling! I'm sure you'll do well!

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butterfly5286 January 22 2019, 14:44:13 UTC

Wow Keito was out for a long while. I bet that had Hikaru on edge all the time.

Sounds like the waking up was awful though. Hopefully from there on he’ll heal fast

Omg most of the guys are really messed up.

Lol I lost it at Chinen and Ryutaro being on each other’s throats

I hope Inoo wakes up soon. They all must be really anxious about him. I wonder how takaki feels? And also daiki, it must be hard to have his best friend in pretty much a coma and then his loved one in such emotional state

Omg I had completely forgotten that Yamada had killed someone. I hope he can deal somewhat well with that and make his peace with it.

Btw what happened with Ichinojo?? Was he so badly hurt that that’s why they got those few days of peace??

Thank you for another exciting chapter. I can’t wait to read the rest

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ryosukekoibito January 25 2019, 05:34:44 UTC
Poor Hikaru is so stressed. He was so glad when Keito woke up. But yeah, the waking up was rough. Everyone had it rough with three fights back to back.

Inoo's coma is rough on all of them, but most definitely hardest on Daiki and Takaki.

Yeah! Yamada's first murder. At least he has a good support system.

Ichinojo's brother Ryuya is the one Yamada killed, so the Wakaba have his death to deal with. Plus they're just as beaten down as the Heisei kumi. They need some time to rest too.

Thank you for commenting darling! I always look forward to hearing from you!

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butterfly5286 January 27 2019, 07:26:46 UTC
Hopefully they are starting to get better after those awful days (at least physically)

Inoo come back!!!!!!

He really does. I am very interested on how he process this and how this is going to change him

Lol yeah, I was wondering about Ichinojo since Inoo managed to stab him, so I am wondering how much damage he manage to make

I love commenting the story with you!!
I hope we can chat soon!!
Take care and say to your sister for me :)

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