kittens

Aug 04, 2017 02:52


Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: none
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Genre: Slice of life
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone from J&A.
Summary: Kenichi is worried about his son, and he stumbles across something that gives him hope ( Read more... )

drabble: kittens

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nazo_yaya August 6 2017, 16:58:07 UTC

Ohhhhhh how sweet! I so love cats. Very often animals are able to help and give love when it is needed the most...

I also see that my question from before is answered, so just forget it 😂

See you soon 👋🏻

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ryosukekoibito September 1 2017, 04:38:51 UTC
Thanks! I love cats too. My cat has helped me through some rough times, so I know exactly what you're talking about.

Thank you for commenting Yaya! You're so sweet, and you know I love hearing from you. ♥

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nazo_yaya September 1 2017, 07:02:01 UTC

Oh my, it's not me being sweet, darling. You're the sweetest.

You know, you can also always talk to me if you want, right? I think you got my private contact. I'll always be there for you, whatever rough time you're going through. ❤️

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ryosukekoibito September 22 2017, 03:46:38 UTC
Thank you so much for your support. I really appreciate it. You're making me emotional. xoxo

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kitsune_hikaru September 12 2017, 13:40:50 UTC
Hi, (random peep here) just dropped by to read your fic and just wanna let you know that I love it!

I dont know why but the nuances in the fic is like a heavy mixture of misery and hope. Some words made my chest hurt and I could feel Kenichi's pain...

He needed to feel loved, supported, and like he was not only not a burden, but needed

This part broke me deep inside. It's like all the hope had lost and he was just gripping nearly anywhere he can just for the sake of his sanity. And then this:

Keito would have someone that was depending on him to care for them.

Not exactly the biggest ray of hope, and it wasnt exactly positive, but it did give a fair amount of longing. This fic didnt exactly make me cry but it left a heavy feeling in my chest. And your ending:

his son’s usually rather empty eyes sparked with curiosity at the sight of the box, that was all that mattered.It actually gave like a sense of new beginning. I think this is around HSJ first established, and I hope it went well exponentially from then on. I love how you ( ... )

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ryosukekoibito September 22 2017, 03:19:51 UTC
Hello! Your comment made me so happy you have no idea! I haven't gotten a comment this in depth in ages, and it was such an amazing surprise.

I love JUMP, and I've been a fan of theirs since the beginning, and I think there were a lot of growing pains in those early years, especially for Keito. Going through your teenage years in the public eye would be hard enough without all of the other difficulties he had to overcome, and so when he revealed that he'd raised kittens around the time of JUMP's debut it just reminded me of that time in his life, and after that this little story practically wrote itself.

I didn't really expect any response to this little thing, since it's from Kenichi's perspective, and it's not exactly a cute or sweet story, and I really appreciate you stopping by and telling me your thoughts! Thank you!!!

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kitsune_hikaru September 22 2017, 15:55:28 UTC
Really? This is my usual way of commenting fic though LOL. Glad that my simple comment made you happy.

Hahah I dont even know if I'm considered a fan since long ago but I've known them since JJ Express and YaYaYah so I kinda can understand that. (Yabu and Yuto was so damn cute back then, why did they grow up sobs forever lol) I remember my first time seeing Keito and he was such a withdrawn kid. But seeing him now makes me feel like a proud mother, (even though I'm just 3 years older than Yabu, I'm such a young mommy lol) he had grown up very splendidly. I think idols are great in the sense that they grew up in such a harsh condition but managed to learn about reality of life in their own way.

I LOVE Kenichi lol. It was actually becoz you wrote in his perspective that I was tempted to read. It's rare that people tackle such issue in such manner and I think you did a very good job. No problem! Thank you for sharing too!

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