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ryeloza

Parks Fic: Hypothesis

Dec 02, 2012 20:01

Title: Hypothesis
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5900
Summary: Kinkmeme prompt: Ben and Leslie play strip poker. Pre-Road Trip.
A/n: This plot bunny wouldn't get out of my head. Yeah. I really just don't know what's wrong with me.

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parks and rec fic, one shot

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emilyla December 3 2012, 01:43:42 UTC

Holy fucking hell. This was ridiculously hot. I love the premise, and you write sexual tension so damn well. I will read anything you write, and you never disappoint!

ryeloza December 4 2012, 01:29:16 UTC

Thank you!! : )

lizinstereo December 3 2012, 02:23:28 UTC

The tension in this fic was amazing. I love AUs that deal with Season 3 tension. And the ending was fraught with emotion.

I'd say more, but I have to go fan myself.

ryeloza December 4 2012, 01:30:49 UTC

Thanks!

c00kie December 3 2012, 02:39:33 UTC

Okay this is all kinds of hot and I kind of love you for it, but really, I can't help but feel sorry for that Teddy Bear. :) Of course April and Andy do weird sex stuff to freak Ben out.

Really though, I could really feel the tension in this, great job.

ryeloza December 4 2012, 01:34:09 UTC

Thank you! I like to think Ben might have gotten some satisfactory revenge once he and Leslie were together.

ashisfriendly December 3 2012, 03:04:10 UTC

I ENJOY THIS TREMENDOUSLY.

ryeloza December 4 2012, 01:34:16 UTC

Thanks!

cacklecats December 3 2012, 03:08:46 UTC

Love it. Can we please get a follow-up with bed cuddling and awkward interaction with Andy & April?

edeainfj December 3 2012, 18:50:59 UTC

^ Yes.

ryeloza December 4 2012, 02:55:18 UTC

Thanks!

(Also, I couldn't resist the follow-up. I have no willpower.)

Part 1/2Living with April has honed Ben's senses, given him the acute ability to realize when she's staring at him, even if he's otherwise occupied. It's a shiver up his spine akin to being doused with a bucket of ice water; a creepy-crawly feeling that makes every hair on his body stand on edge. And it's that unnerving feeling that draws him from an otherwise deep sleep ( ... )

ryeloza December 4 2012, 02:55:38 UTC

Part 2/2If she's expecting him to feel remorse for his sarcasm, she's sadly mistaken. He reaches for the phone and begins to delete the pictures--starting with the especially creepy ones of them sleeping and ending with the one April just took. The one where he looks utterly frustrated and Leslie ( ... )

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