Fic Request Fulfilled for midnight_birth

[lissomelle]

Title: Moving On...Or Not
Author: slam_girl
Beta: luvscharlie
Rating: PG-13-ish
Word count: 8,703
Summary: After a brief attempt at a relationship, Ron and Hermione agree to remain just friends. But Ron is still in love with her and wants to make another go of it. Ron worries too much time may have passed and things get even more difficult when an old acquaintance

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[midnight_birth]

First of all, I am so so sorry for not reviwing this story right away. I was sure I did, but I suppose I didn't press the "post" button. :(

Let me just get to the most important thing: I loved this story!! I thought it was absolutely incredible! You took every single one of my requests, and you wrote them all perfectly. This is exactly what I wanted, and so much better than I even knew it could get!! :)

The awkwardness was perfect, as well as their interaction. You really caught the essence of the two of them. The dinner scene was hilarious. I really know how nerve-wracking it is to have dinner with parents like this, and I really feel bad for poor Ron.

The jealousy was amazing! :D I loved your Krum, and how jealous Ron got. Just the thing I was talking about in my request. And, of course, Ron's ultimate gesture was awesome! I gasped and was embarrassed for him. But at the same time it was so brave and so sweet!!

On to favorite lines:

He hadn't seen her in what felt like months, though it had really only been eight days and six hours and twenty minutes if you wanted to get specific. And yes, he was counting. --> Aww. I know how that feels.

Well, maybe that was a little dramatic, but bloody hell, he was so far gone that he was perpetually sappy. --> :D Sappy's good enough for me. ;)

Merlin, she smelled lovely, like a Hogwarts' feast and Christmas and a Cannons' win all rolled up into one. --> I love how perfectly descriptive this is.

"No, I think you should continue mooning about her forever," said Harry flatly. --> Ha! at Harry and his sarcasm.

How was he being immature? She was the immature one. He could stomp around too, and he stomped right after her. --> This is really cute, and so Ron.

He tried to reign in some of his more obscene thoughts, as they seemed rather inappropriate with Hermione's parents sitting only a few feet away. --> Yay! Obscene thoughts! Funny.

I love you and I want you to be my vife, I mean wife, someday. I'm sorry I never said that before," Ron finished. --> LOL!!!!

Ron wanted to savor the moment; it had been a long time since their last kiss, but he knew there would be more to come, so he kissed her harder as if it were both their first and last kiss. --> This is an amazingly hot description. Love it!!

Once again, thank you so much! This was funny, witty, romantic and just everything I could've possibly asked for!!