Fic Request Fulfilled for i_am_girlfriday

Jun 05, 2008 01:00

Title: Hermione Moves On. Or, 'Honestly, I'm Really Completely Over Ron'.
Author: butterfly_kate
Beta: trinaweena
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,802
Summary: Two years on from their first kiss, Ron and Hermione are still trying to move on.
Warnings: Some language.
Notes: --

Hermione Moves On. Or, 'Honestly, I'm Really Completely Over Ron'. )

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luvscharlie June 5 2008, 05:41:58 UTC
I love your writing style and ease with which your words seem to flow. It's a well written, heartfelt piece of writing. Well done.

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butterfly_kate June 12 2008, 16:34:10 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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i_am_girlfriday June 5 2008, 05:52:06 UTC
I think I love you. You got everything right AND you managed to throw in some Luna! I feel utterly spoiled that you had to write for me again. :)

'It could be anyone. It could be, a murderer, or a rapist - a Slytherin or You-Know-Who.'

She raised her eyebrows. 'Ron, if I'm sure of one thing in this life, it's that Anthony Goldstein is not sending me off on a date with Voldemort.' He seemed to have a slight lingering twitch in response to the name, even now. 'I appreciate your concern, really, but it'll be fine. I'll be fine.'

That is so funny and I can absolutely hear their voices!

Thank you thank you thank you!

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butterfly_kate June 12 2008, 16:35:59 UTC
Aww :) I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to replying to your lovely review, by the way.

I was so worried you'd get sick of me I was like 'argh, what do I write?!' for a while there!

I don't know why but I can't stop putting Luna in everything I write, even as a minor character!

You're very welcome my dear :)

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i_am_girlfriday June 13 2008, 02:09:08 UTC
I was so worried you'd get sick of me I was like 'argh, what do I write?!'

I'd never get sick of you or your writing ;)

I had to come back and reread :) I just really love this. I mean, come on! It's Ron and Hermione doing what they are best at! It's very hard for me to imagine these two hooking up right after DH and I really wanted someone to explore that. You approached this fic with humor and I love that!

'You're in love with me?'

'Yes. But there's no need to make a big deal out of it.'

Perfection.

There's always room for Luna in any fic. :)

Thanks again!

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charma_10 June 5 2008, 13:16:22 UTC
Fantastic fic. It was so completely THEM to not know what the other was thinking and you wrote it wonderfully.

Congrats

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butterfly_kate June 12 2008, 16:36:18 UTC
Thank you so much!

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9t9 June 5 2008, 20:31:04 UTC
That was great-just the right amount of angst and a really sweet get together :)

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butterfly_kate June 12 2008, 16:36:52 UTC
Thank you! And thanks for reading!

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slam_girl June 7 2008, 07:09:38 UTC
You nailed the cluelessness Ron and Hermione always seem to have towards each other so perfectly. And their moment of realization was so simple and sweet. :)

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butterfly_kate June 12 2008, 16:37:40 UTC
Thanks so much - that cluelessness is such a big part of their relationship, I think. It's one of the main reasons I love them anyways!

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