final film
So, I'm working on this movie, and here is the concept, and what do you think I should do.
a group of friends go for an adventure at Ithaca Gun, the old factory... the couple leaves the group to have a talk (about what?) and stays in the same place the entire movie - they are the audience's sense of safety, comfort, and stasis.
The others (three?) walk off to explore together, and start getting creeped out, camera moves intensely, there are shadows everywhere and somehow they get separated, etc etc etc.
Meanwhile the movie continues to cut back to the room upstairs where the couple went, and all the things they're saying, and it becomes romantic drama. Then we cut back to horror, wierd shit going down. Back and forth.
In the end the third girl is walking through the building tentatively, sees the two others (who went adventuring) lying on the ground, possibly dead, and doesn't seem to care, but not in a devious way as much as a blank, apathetic way. She walks up the stairs to approach the couple, and the audio hints that she is guilty of something. Perhaps a voice, as she walks up the stairs, says, as if reciting a poem, "I'm walking through cobwebs up to the top just to look down on all that I've done." Or perhaps it's too wierd, or too corny. I don't know. She sees the couple, they see her, they stop talking.
We black out.
Maybe they say "I love you."
a group of friends go for an adventure at Ithaca Gun, the old factory... the couple leaves the group to have a talk (about what?) and stays in the same place the entire movie - they are the audience's sense of safety, comfort, and stasis.
The others (three?) walk off to explore together, and start getting creeped out, camera moves intensely, there are shadows everywhere and somehow they get separated, etc etc etc.
Meanwhile the movie continues to cut back to the room upstairs where the couple went, and all the things they're saying, and it becomes romantic drama. Then we cut back to horror, wierd shit going down. Back and forth.
In the end the third girl is walking through the building tentatively, sees the two others (who went adventuring) lying on the ground, possibly dead, and doesn't seem to care, but not in a devious way as much as a blank, apathetic way. She walks up the stairs to approach the couple, and the audio hints that she is guilty of something. Perhaps a voice, as she walks up the stairs, says, as if reciting a poem, "I'm walking through cobwebs up to the top just to look down on all that I've done." Or perhaps it's too wierd, or too corny. I don't know. She sees the couple, they see her, they stop talking.
We black out.
Maybe they say "I love you."