Love it! But... wasn't Rorschach actually sort of polite with Silk Spectre? I mean, I know they're not friends and all, but ... My brain kinda can't imagine them talking to each other this way...
Sure he was polite -- after she yelled at him. Dunno, not sure how polite he really was. They barely talked to each-other and never had a scene alone. Or maybe he was just more easily ruffled back then. It's hard to say. If it doesn't work, it doesn't work though... I'll see what I can do or scrap this part entirely.
Re: Thanks Raffi!runninglonelyMay 1 2009, 13:31:37 UTC
ck! err,well I won't then. Still the dialogue was the ONLY part that came out naturally, easily, and if it doesn't work then the point of the whole darn thing is moot. -_- Dunno, I thought after 5-7 hours of being cooped up waiting for something to happen, her more or less babbling at him the whole time this was a natural result. She says something that frays his temper, he says something sarcastic, she responds poorly. It seemed natural to me, but... if it doesn't work. :( Bah, what should I do? Any ideas?
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Dunno, not sure how polite he really was. They barely talked to each-other and never had a scene alone. Or maybe he was just more easily ruffled back then. It's hard to say.
If it doesn't work, it doesn't work though... I'll see what I can do or scrap this part entirely.
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Still the dialogue was the ONLY part that came out naturally, easily, and if it doesn't work then the point of the whole darn thing is moot. -_-
Dunno, I thought after 5-7 hours of being cooped up waiting for something to happen, her more or less babbling at him the whole time this was a natural result. She says something that frays his temper, he says something sarcastic, she responds poorly. It seemed natural to me, but... if it doesn't work. :( Bah, what should I do? Any ideas?
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♥ ♥ ♥ I'm loving you and your fic more than I probably should, so please leave it as it is~ ♥ ♥ ♥
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