[Naruto] Things that could have happened had Hizashi been the older son - 4

Mar 07, 2007 13:50

Title: Things that could have happened had Hizashi been the older son (or: a cage is a cage is a curse, dammit.)
Author: runespoor7
Rating: PG-13
Summary: series of unrelated drabbles/ficlets. So far, drabbles include various flavours of implied Neji-Hina-Naru combinations , but it's really Hyuuga-centered gen with occasional cameos of other characters.
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ship: neji/hinata, ch: hinata, a cage is a curse, fandom: naruto, ch: neji, fic, au, break a cliché!, ch: hizashi

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cutemara March 7 2007, 16:18:19 UTC
Nice! Glad to see you're back!

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runespoor7 March 8 2007, 09:16:29 UTC
I posted something two days ago, but thanks! ^_^

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cutemara March 8 2007, 16:30:10 UTC
haha, I know but I didn't have time to reply on Monday so I just replied collectively on Wednesday! :D

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vindiya March 7 2007, 19:25:52 UTC
Obsessed with Hinata. Hehe so perfectly fitting for him. Count on Neji to become obsessed. So completely perfect. Can't wait to see more. ^.~

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runespoor7 March 8 2007, 09:17:21 UTC
He totally is. Glad you liked!

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mariagoner March 7 2007, 20:36:49 UTC
Oh, you are intent on downright spoiling us as of late, aren't you? ;) Seriously, to what do we owe this sudden influx of drabbles to? I shall gladly make a shiny offering to it, if only we could get more and more and more glimpses at this fascinating alternate universe!

Also, like I said before, I just knew you'd bring in some fascinating points of both lightness and darkness into this world, even about a "fluffy" subject like Neji opening up towards Hinata more and more. I mean, I absolutely adore the stunning contrasts you set up between both Hizashi and Hinata and their view of Neji in the first two pieces. There's no one so blind as one who has all pervading sight and you show that maxim off so beautifully here. ♥

And the last drabble is fully, sweet, delicious love. (And you said you were bad at fluff! ;) I mean... it's Neji! Obsessing sweetly over his absolutely impenetrable cousin! And getting suggestions from Lee! And suggestive looks from Ten-Ten! Man, that makes me want to roll around the floor in glee for a bit. ;)

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runespoor7 March 8 2007, 09:41:07 UTC
I have a lot of fic ideas, and they don't want to get written, and instead I sit in front of my computer and starts typing madly about things that I know only the first sentence of, and then they're done. (And I don't need to have writer's block over them, too.) And please don't make a shrine to it. *stabs Celebrationverse in the eyes*

I like to take the head of the Hyuuga clan, blind him to all interpersonal interactions around him, and then crush his world under Hinata and Neji's uncommon stubborness.

I don't know if I'm bad at fluff, I just know it bores me very quickly. As a side note, the third ficlet began as angst too, and then... angst gets boring after a while as well. *hides short-attention span* So I dragged his teammates into it, because Neji clearly needs mocking. (Lee was thinking about Sakura the whole while, you know it.)

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mariagoner March 9 2007, 05:32:57 UTC
Oh dear, I guess all the flower garlands I've been offering to whatever muse inspired you for this universe have gone awfully awry?! ;)

I like to take the head of the Hyuuga clan, blind him to all interpersonal interactions around him, and then crush his world under Hinata and Neji's uncommon stubborness.

I think it's a constant of the Hyuuga that whoever's at the head of them will constantly be the most clueless one as to where the future actually is headed. Perhaps Hinata, if she ever ascends to the top in the "real" Narutoverse, will be the one to change that...?

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runespoor7 March 9 2007, 08:25:21 UTC
I think that's due to the fact that they are playing God with people simply by dividing them into Main House/Branch House, and as the head of the Hyuuga clan, they obviously can do no wrong.

where the future actually is headed

I think it's more 'what the people surrounding them will make out of the present', you know? And since Hinata was apparently the first of them to think one could change one's lot, I don't doubt that she'll be able to change that. (When Naruto is Hokage or something, since he's the hero. :D)

*ignooooooriiiiiiiiiing the first sentence* *starts typing again*

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ariaeve March 7 2007, 21:41:11 UTC
*flail* Obsessed! YES!! He's so obviously developing a crush on her, even if he's totally clueless about it. XD

Fweee, can't wait for more! ♥♥♥♥

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runespoor7 March 8 2007, 09:21:29 UTC
The world needs more clueless Neji. He needs to get teased from time to time. (Isn't he cute.)

Glad you liked!

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mattador March 12 2007, 17:57:42 UTC
Really loving these ficlets!!!

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runespoor7 March 14 2007, 08:05:28 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

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