[Naruto] Patriarch (how not to be a)

[runespoor7]

Title: Patriarch (how not to be a)
Author: runespoor7 
Rating: PG
Summary: Once, one of the brats of Jiraiya's brat stole a Sharingan.
Notes:…This started as a cracky two-line parenthesis in another fic. Then I realised it was getting to be a ficlet, still cracky, but with things that could be called serious undertones if you were feeling indulgent. Then it

Comments

[elict]

Wonderful. I love it.

I find Jiraiya really hard to write, and this was lovely. He and Tsunade really are the only ones (on the "good" side) who has the whole picture, aren't they?

The usage of the word "brat" confused me sometimes, because there was a lot of it. But in the same time, it's so very much like Jiraiya, therefore I wouldn't want it any other way ^^'';

[runespoor7]

If anyone had told me I'd find Orochimaru to the easiest to write out of the Sannin - if anyone had told me I'd find Tsunade easier to write than Jiraiya...

They do have the whole picture, and it's so hard to stay ambiguous is these conditions.

Ah , yes. Brat. Well, I needed a Jiraiya word to avoid having to name Yondaime, and then it just sort of became Jiraiya's word to call kids he care about. Is there any special occurence where it was too unclear, or is it just the fact that it comes up so much that makes it hard to follow?

[elict]

It's more the fact that it's used so much. One has to think before one understands who he's thinking about. But it's not a big problem, it's probably just me being slow XP

[runespoor7]

Okay. I'll try to think if I want to make an effort and find another word because this fic frightens me a little to tell the truth.

Otherwise I'll just blame Jiraiya.

[elict]

...I kind of don't want another word ^^''; Because this one fits Jiraiya so well.

I should've just kept silent -__-

[runespoor7]

Oh no no no, I didn't mean change every single occurence of the word, just maybe try and think up another way for him to call the bratses once or twice?...

*pets?...*