[Naruto] Oversights and Celebrations 2/2

Nov 27, 2006 13:51

Title: Oversights and Celebrations
Author: runespoor7
Rating: hard R: fairly graphic scene.
Summary: After The War Against Sound, the Rookie Nine (and additions) spend the evening celebratring. This apparently translates into 'prying into Hinata's sexual life'. NejiHina.
Notes: Breaks all rules relative to war and angst. Mostly angst-free, as I do not know ( Read more... )

celebrationverse, ship: neji/hinata, ch: hinata, smut, fandom: naruto, ch: neji, fic

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cutemara November 27 2006, 21:35:33 UTC
Wow...do you have more? *grins*

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 10:08:13 UTC
Not an actual follow up, but I do have more planned for this 'verse. Hinata would've spontaneously combusted if I'd done more of this scene.

I'm glad you liked it!

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cutemara December 1 2006, 15:19:54 UTC
yes, I did! Very, very much! We have such few long, well thought out, deep stories in this pairing...

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la_belle_roo November 27 2006, 23:51:38 UTC
Damn! Hot stuff.

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 10:08:47 UTC
Thanks! ;)

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kamecchi November 28 2006, 02:26:31 UTC
If you kept going, I really would've gotten horny *_* Neji will spin for you for that!! ♥

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 10:09:49 UTC
Hee, thanks. ...your icon is too cute. *stares*

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gedembol November 28 2006, 13:17:21 UTC
alright, i was bloody irritated by the long-winded story that you've written on the 1st page. as for the second one, yay! there was sex! overall, it was worth reading. though i've gotta admit that, the long-windedness was bloody irritating.

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 10:11:59 UTC
Hm, I'm sorry you were annoyed by the first part - was there anything in particular you hated, or was it just generally annoying? Anyway, I'm glad you stuck around and found something you liked. Thanks for reading & reviewing!

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gedembol December 1 2006, 15:07:21 UTC
woah, hold your horses~ i really didnt mean to sound mean or anything. it was just that, they way you've written the 1st part of the story, which involved tons of 'YOUR insightfull-ness'style was kinda erm... unfamiliar for me. that was why i didnt really enjoy reading them. whereas your 2nd part was cleaner. just so you know, your story DEFINATELY got me 'arching my back in pleasure' for more MORE and MORE of it.

ps: so sorry for sounding so mean...i really hoped i didnt hurt your feelings. sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry TT3TT

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 16:02:43 UTC
Oops... I didn't mean to sound offended - because honestly I'm not. *awkward* Like I said, I'm glad you stuck around anyway.

But don't worry, you didn't hurt my feelings. :) What kind of writer would I be if I couldn't take some criticism?

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elict November 28 2006, 14:07:54 UTC
I... I love it. So much. I love love love love it.

Thank you.

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elict November 28 2006, 14:08:40 UTC
and i just realized that my icon is riddiculously fitting for this. eh.

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runespoor7 December 1 2006, 10:13:35 UTC
Wheeeee! Thanks! ^_^

...And, you're right. That icon *is* ridiculiously fitting. *pets Neji*

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