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Another Dare

Apr 21, 2009 13:08

Maple Walnut #7. Poker Face
with Hot Fudge, Whipped Cream, Chopped Nuts, and Malt
Story : knights
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1251
Word Count : 840 ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] maple walnut, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna

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guil_solo April 21 2009, 19:19:07 UTC

*snrk!* Very nice indeed.

shayna611 April 21 2009, 19:19:51 UTC

Thank you! :)

nathskywalker April 21 2009, 19:24:08 UTC

Oh, evil Sethan messing with Kairn. I really liked this, especially they the first part when you suddenly revealed that they were in a classroom with other people and not alone as I thought at first. And the prompt fit it really nicely.

shayna611 April 21 2009, 19:32:43 UTC

If he wasn't messing with someone, he wouldn't be Sethan ;)

Glad it worked!

Thanks :)

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shayna611 April 21 2009, 19:34:21 UTC

thanks :)

theoryoferin April 21 2009, 19:56:23 UTC

haha, fabulous!! :D

shayna611 April 21 2009, 19:58:28 UTC

Thanks! :)

fachefaucheux April 21 2009, 20:19:31 UTC

Ohoh, in a room full of people even? XD This was fabulous! Kairn's so abused. And Sethan manages to get away with just about everything, doesn't he?

Very, very much approved. ^^

shayna611 April 21 2009, 20:30:49 UTC

I am so glad you approve! I was afraid the whole thing might have been a bit of a tease or a cop out.

And of course Sethan gets away with it. He is Sethan after all. ;)

Thanks :)

fachefaucheux April 21 2009, 20:33:40 UTC

Well, it is a bit of a tease, but it's teasing in a satisfying way. It's also, as you said, very much IC for Sethan. I live on subtext. XD And I've come to find it in a way more amusing/entertaining than the alternative.

shayna611 April 21 2009, 20:43:00 UTC

yes, subtext is the best :)

you'd said you wanted Sethan to "teach Kairn a lesson" and all I could think was that would require 1. that he have some clue about sex (which he doesn't) and 2. that he had any desire to get any action at all.

So I went for the good old reliable "screwing with Kairn's head" method ;)

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