Comments | runaway_tales: Vanilla #12-Storm, Pumpkin Pie #7- Special effects

julyflame in runaway_tales

Vanilla #12-Storm, Pumpkin Pie #7- Special effects

Apr 20, 2009 23:37

Author: July
Flavors: Vanilla #12-Storm, Pumpkin Pie#7- Special effects
Extra: Pocky
Story: Illene (AU)
Rating:PG
Word Count: 68
( The striking of lightning- )

[extra] pocky, [challenge] pumpkin pie, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 3

guil_solo April 21 2009, 09:20:25 UTC

Very visual, very nice (and, seeing as I know who that is, pretty sad as well) *hugs* Good job.

kunenk April 21 2009, 13:54:53 UTC

Great imagery.

miameirohara April 23 2009, 21:15:07 UTC

Very nice imagery and descriptions. It really shows the character's state of mind in the moment.