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shayna611 in runaway_tales

Apr 10, 2009 00:19

Molasses #4. Forbidden Fruit with Hot Fudge
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1258
Word Count : 285

( Sethan & Shasa )

Comments 21

fachefaucheux April 10 2009, 05:50:14 UTC

You did a good job of capturing the scene, but alas, all I can think is "Sethan, you bastard". XD

shayna611 April 10 2009, 13:18:09 UTC

thank you!

and good, cause he is ;)

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shayna611 April 10 2009, 13:18:37 UTC

Thank you!

Glad he can be unsettling even when hot :)

nathskywalker April 10 2009, 09:22:34 UTC

I love the description. It's so ... I don't know. Maybe it's the quiet certainty you use to describe Sethan's moves.

shayna611 April 10 2009, 13:18:45 UTC

Thank you! :)

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shayna611 April 10 2009, 16:49:22 UTC

thank you! :)

hi_falootin April 10 2009, 19:24:39 UTC

I love how Shasa seems to think she's the seducer here, but she's totally playing into his hand...

and ooh, great kiss description :)

shayna611 April 10 2009, 19:29:25 UTC

he's awful that way... (I wonder if he could apply that to Kairn for your dare)

thanks! :)