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Mar 31, 2009 11:09

Cotton Candy #11. Reassurance
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1261
Word Count : 457

Since I think I've only named names once, Cheva is the Life Goddess.

( one less thing to worry about )

[challenge] cotton candy, [author] shayna

Comments 14

nathskywalker March 31 2009, 18:51:53 UTC

I guess that's a nice goddess to have on your side.

shayna611 March 31 2009, 19:02:29 UTC

one would expect it to be :)

hi_falootin March 31 2009, 19:34:30 UTC

Hm...Mara and the Goddess of Life? I guess I should have pieced that together from all her green. Now I'm intrigued! Loved the description of sleeping Mara :)

shayna611 March 31 2009, 19:44:40 UTC

just wait till you see what sort of interest the goddess takes in her...

shayna611 March 31 2009, 19:44:56 UTC

oh and thanks, of course :)

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shayna611 March 31 2009, 21:04:34 UTC

Thank you! :)

ichthusfish March 31 2009, 23:20:01 UTC

Love the description of sleeping baby Mara, and I found Lyssa's paranoia very funny, though I guess it's possibly not ment to be. I remember the name Cheva from before. It was good to see the priestess at work determining who was watching over her. Nice :)

shayna611 April 1 2009, 01:07:20 UTC

Thank you :)

and Lyssa's got every reason to be paranoid

sylvrilyn April 1 2009, 21:16:29 UTC

I really liked the descriptions in this piece.

shayna611 April 1 2009, 21:33:09 UTC

thank you :)