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Mar 23, 2009 11:42

Cotton Candy #16. Diet
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1256
Word Count : 300

( random Rune & Lyssa )

[challenge] cotton candy, [author] shayna

Comments 18

nathskywalker March 23 2009, 17:51:18 UTC

awe, cute and totally realistic. I love the dialogue. It's just not fair that guys can eat so much and don't gain any weight and us girls have more problems getting rid of the weight :(

shayna611 March 23 2009, 20:20:03 UTC

totally not fair and thanks :)

slysionnachnano March 23 2009, 19:25:52 UTC

Fantastic ending! For something short and cute, this was adorable.

He totally does magic it off, by the way. Liar. =P

shayna611 March 23 2009, 20:21:28 UTC

thank you! :)

he certainly doesn't do it intentionally, but I'd be willing to bet Rune being skin and bones isn't 100% natural

sylvrilyn March 23 2009, 19:34:03 UTC

Hehe! Their interaction is so amusing. I like the end especially.

shayna611 March 23 2009, 20:21:49 UTC

thank you :)

ichthusfish March 24 2009, 00:05:35 UTC

LOL! So cute and funny, and the last line was just perfect. I'm noticing a trend with the guys who use magic a lot being skinny and boney (unless I've missread things). Wonder if it has anything to do with the magic... like a side effect or something. Anyway, good use of the prompt :)

shayna611 March 24 2009, 01:42:34 UTC

yeah, that does seem to be a stereotype, doesn't it? (though Tristan has magic and he's pretty darn buff) And in Rune's case I can actually say it does likely have something to do with his particular goddess and brand of magic, even if perhaps it's subconcious or accidental

Thanks! :)

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shayna611 March 24 2009, 02:23:10 UTC

lol, he'd probably give it up if he could - seiously, the man is skin and bones.

thanks :)