The Rune/Ski Business - Part Three

Jul 29, 2008 17:05

Chocolate #15. Passion with a Cherry
Rating : NC-17 - not for the eyes of minors or persons related to me by blood
Timeframe : right after the last piece

Well, I've done it. Here's my smut in public... (cherry for that)

part three )

[challenge] chocolate, [topping] cherry, [author] shayna

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slysionnachnano July 29 2008, 22:33:12 UTC
*wipes brow* Okay, phew. That was intense. I don't know how you do it...you write it so well and manage to use such beautiful language. I am totally jealous.

Ski, why are you crying?! And, of course, Rune is sweetly humorous...as usual.

Marvelous piece. I owe you a billion!

*round of applause, standing ovation, all that jazz*

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shayna611 July 29 2008, 22:36:42 UTC
thank you :)

I thought this might come off too horribly awkward, glad it worked

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slysionnachnano July 29 2008, 22:49:07 UTC
Not awkward to me. Well, not WHOA awkward. There were no smashing teeth or bumping heads.

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sylvrilyn October 15 2008, 19:09:37 UTC
Is there a difference between erotica and smut? Because it felt too elegant to be labeled smut. You did a lovely job on this.

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shayna611 October 15 2008, 19:22:19 UTC
thank you :)

I dunno, I lump 'em all together. I'll take the elegant over the vulgar myself, but it's all still porn.

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