Sly's long awaited challenge

[shayna611]

Pistachio #14. The Night Before with a Brownie

Comments

[slysionnachnano]

Ski drunk is amazingly funny and sad at the same time. Sad because of what does happen to her...poor Masakari...*hugs*

You really outdid yourself. I loved the whole dance, and the subtle hints from friends. And the playboy prince Terrel with his want for Ski. Good for Ski, standing up to him! And not prostrating before the nobles and sucking up to them just makes her a better person.

I loved it.

But now I must go read part two...

[shayna611]

thank you :)

[shayna611]

thank you :)

it's ok, take your time - took me months to write it

[kage_ankoku]

I loved this story. Reading about a drunken Ski was both sad and amusing, and the whole thing was well written. Well done. =3

[shayna611]

Thank you :)

[hi_falootin]

Nice! I loved this all the way from Rune and Tess in the beginning (lol she led the dance!) to the Rune and drunken-Ski scene at the end. The pacing worked really well and it didn't even feel like that long of a piece (this is compliment, I promise!) because all the different scenes were so interesting -- so now I have to go read part 2 :D

[shayna611]

Thank you! :)