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Dating Game

Mar 01, 2009 14:51

Mollasses #20. Alpha Male with Chopped Nuts, Milkshake, and Malt

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[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [challenge] molasses, [extra] milkshake, [author] shayna

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slysionnachnano March 1 2009, 22:06:39 UTC

LMAO. That was...oh god, that was great. Tears are running from my eyes. Chuth, you dolt...

Great job! You got Chuth's babbling down pat...especially around pretty girls ;)

shayna611 March 1 2009, 22:08:47 UTC

Phew! I am so glad it worked. The whole goal was to make you laugh! Thanks! :)

hi_falootin March 1 2009, 22:36:49 UTC

OMG that was hilarious! Poor Chuth (can I call him hapless here?). He kind of brought that on himself though...

I think it was good of Lyssa to put up with at as long as she did XD

shayna611 March 1 2009, 22:41:50 UTC

Thank you! (you know... he and Kairn do, ever so very slightly, remind me of each other...)

Lyssa just always hopes there's some chance she might get something out of it. She didn't really want to hear about Kyith in the bedroom though

ichthusfish March 3 2009, 03:22:57 UTC

ROTFLMAO!!! Oh, hysterical! Poor, silly boy Chuth. I started laughing from the 2nd Kyith, right up to the end where I went "aww!" lol :)

shayna611 March 3 2009, 07:11:03 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I had fun ripping on poor Chuth, even if it was a bit more than he deserved =)

theoryoferin March 27 2009, 03:16:09 UTC

hahaha, that was great!

shayna611 March 27 2009, 03:35:24 UTC

Thanks! :)

kage_ankoku April 10 2009, 23:32:39 UTC

I could have sworn I commented on this back when you first wrote it. Ah well.

Chuth made me laugh so much in this piece. Poor Lyssa, being stuck as a the third wheel when Kyith isn't even present. Great job!

shayna611 April 11 2009, 00:05:25 UTC

Thanks! :)