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[shayna611]

Cotton Candy #22. Interruption
Story : knights
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1267
Word Count : 439

Comments

[hi_falootin]

afgkhgjhlghjfdhjg brilliant.

Poor, poor, pathetic Kairn D: I love that she didn't know the guys names. And I love this:

“I think,” said Lyssa, “that whatever offer you’re about to make would be better left unspoken.”

So awkward...

[shayna611]

Thank you! I was really happy with that line too :)

I am too mean to the poor guy, but he brings it on himself.

[mpiper]

Ahh, but was he going to offer himself, or suggest she go find Rune...

btw, I keep saying, and you keep denying, but this is good evidence for my argument.

[shayna611]

That is a good point...

And yeah, yeah, I know what you think of Lyssa and her morals, but it's usually the way you present the argument that has me in denial :P

[shayna611]

Thank you :)

She prefers it that way.

[shayna611]

Thanks, I rather enjoy torturing my characters... glad you appreciate it :)

[kitsuneasika]

Aww, poor Kairn!

I'm growing a bit fond of Kairn/Lyssa. O-O

[shayna611]

but... but Rune!

They're actually growing on me a bit too, though Rune will always win.

Thanks :)

[ichthusfish]

Awww... poor Kairn :( *gives Kairn a hugz*

I feel very sorry for him, but there seems to be something deeper below the surface of Lyssa's actions which he is missing; maybe that she's not aware of either :)

(and I'm tired, so I don't know if that made sense)

[shayna611]

No, that made perfect sense! And I'm glad you see it, because I meant it.

Thanks! =)