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Peach 13

Feb 17, 2017 21:05

Title: Working Holiday
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Peach #13 (tell someone who cares)
Toppings/Extras: Cherry (for the epistolary format)
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 2713
Notes: April 1951; Julia Graves, Edward Iveson.
Summary: “I seem to have wandered into the first few chapters of a detective novel…”

( Working Holiday )

[topping] cherry, [author] lost_spook, [challenge] peach

Comments 3

winebabe February 17 2017, 21:27:20 UTC

Oh this was lovely! I loved the letter format, and God, how real the whole situation seemed! You are a wonderful writer.

lost_spook February 18 2017, 20:47:47 UTC

Aw, thank you! It was a fun format to try. :-)

And I always think your stuff always seems much more real than mine - you've a nice knack for description that I lack!

winebabe February 19 2017, 02:21:52 UTC

I disagree! I think your descriptions are always wonderful--especially when it comes to expressing your characters' thoughts/feelings. :) But thank you!