Comments | runaway_tales: Strawberry Banana #22, Pomelo #26, Angel Food #2

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Strawberry Banana #22, Pomelo #26, Angel Food #2

May 29, 2016 16:26

Author: winebabe
Title: Because You Got Out of Hand
Story: The Gemini Occurrence
Rating: PG-13 (Content: vague mentions of domestic abuse and drug usage)
Flavor(s): Strawberry Banana #22: a hug; Pomelo #26: often one finds one's destiny just where one hides to avoid it; Angel Food #2: false idols
Word Count: 1025
Summary: 2025; When you grow up in the ( Read more... )

[challenge] pomelo, [challenge] angel food, [challenge] strawberry banana, [author] winebabe

Comments 4

skybirdday May 30 2016, 00:28:53 UTC

Oh, this is not going to end well for
either of them. I have a feeling. :(
But she doesn't believe in herself and
her husband has probably kept her home.
She is almost like her mother. What
happened to her parents 10 years later?
Keep this up. Very interesting.

winebabe May 30 2016, 02:13:30 UTC

Thank you! I haven't completely figured out where everything is going...but you're right in that it's not going to be gentle and light!

lost_spook May 30 2016, 06:59:55 UTC

Oh, this is excellent! I love the tears turning to diamonds part particularly, and the edges of the odd world-building.

winebabe May 30 2016, 16:14:22 UTC

Wow, thank you! <3 It's been so long since I've seriously written anything, so I'm diving in headfirst with this idea.