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Finding Her

Apr 08, 2013 17:46

Title: Finding Her

Author: Amata le Fay
Story: Omni
Flavor(s): Chocolate Chip Mint 12 (warped), Dark Chocolate 1 (isolation), and Pomegranate 17 (first aid)
Toppings: Whipped Cream (Becca and Mark are both 16)
Extras: Banana
Rating: PG
Notes: My first non-story contribution to RaTs, so let's see how it goes! Mark finds an unconscious Becca at the edge of ( Read more... )

[author] amata le fay, [challenge] dark chocolate, [extra] banana, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [challenge] pomegranate

Comments 3

ichthusfish April 9 2013, 04:18:33 UTC

I really like this, especially the way the text is merged with the image. Poor Mark looks so worried. Really nice work on this :)

nathskywalker April 9 2013, 14:59:50 UTC

I love the way the text frames them even though I can't read it all. I guess I'm not supposed to anyway. It took me a second to realize that it was letters, not squiggles around them but I guess that makes you look twice (and longer).

rustydragonfly April 9 2013, 17:19:02 UTC

Oh cool, more Omni! I haven't seen a lot of that lately. I like the text effect too, curious what it says.