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Coffee # 26-Hook; Chocolate # 11-Confusion

Nov 18, 2011 14:35

Author: Dragons_Kin
Title: Trial
Flavor: Coffee # 26-Hook; Chocolate # 11-Confusion
Story:Guardians
Word Count:1,519
Rating: PG
Summary:The trial was ceremony that claimed innocence, claimed guilt

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Comments 5

ichthusfish November 19 2011, 01:03:46 UTC

Oh, well done at the end there Ivy... This guy isn't much of a people person is he? There's a lot of tension in this scene, understandably so from the main players. It's an interesting contrast that the audience doesn't seem so invested, they're just there. Nicely done :)

dragons_kin November 19 2011, 14:45:13 UTC

Not when it comes to people with magic. He only comes around when he's needed to come around...He kinda forgets about Shizu's history and all...

blossomdreams November 19 2011, 02:28:05 UTC

I liked this. I could feel the tension in the air of everyone there. Poor Shizu and good job Ivy.

Good job!

dragons_kin November 21 2011, 20:05:56 UTC

Thank you! :D

kay_brooke November 21 2011, 19:34:50 UTC

The tension in this piece is done so well! I felt sorry for Shizu and kind of suspicious of everyone else.