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darkfaerieclaw in runaway_tales

And Sometimes the Chess Board is You

Nov 06, 2011 23:37

Title: And Sometimes the Chess Board is You
Story Continuity: Down By the Water
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 21: blackmail, Gingerbread 7: seven with one blow, Passionfruit 20: Scratch a lover, and find a foe - Dorothy Parker
Characters: Annie Tark, Jemesk Graymarch
Rating: PG
Summary: Jemesk goes over his options. Annie helps. Kind of.

( 'Seeing ghosts, Jemesk?' )

[challenge] gingerbread, [inactive-author] dark faerie claw, [challenge] blueberry yogurt, [challenge] passionfruit

Comments 7

toxic_fairie November 7 2011, 06:16:07 UTC

This is very well written. The conversation is natural, the emotions real. Such a creepy sentiment in Annie's last line.

darkfaerieclaw November 7 2011, 06:26:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm flattered you think so.

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darkfaerieclaw November 7 2011, 17:49:51 UTC

Thanks! Really glad this worked for you. :)

kay_brooke November 7 2011, 20:35:51 UTC

Ooh, love the conversation. Nicely creepy, especially with the questions surrounding Dawn's motives.

darkfaerieclaw November 7 2011, 20:40:42 UTC

Thank you! Good to hear it's turned out fine. <3

bookblather November 8 2011, 02:08:47 UTC

I freaking LOVE this. Your DIALOGUE. OMG. YOUR DIALOGUE. SERIOUSLY. ONLY CAPSLOCK EXPRESSES THE AWESOME.

Also, that last question is one all of us should ask ourselves, I think...

darkfaerieclaw November 8 2011, 04:31:05 UTC

Oh, you always know what to say to make me blush. <3

Thank you! I'm happy to have earned capslock glee.