Comments | runaway_tales: Cheeseburger 5, Passionfruit 12: Sunset

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Cheeseburger 5, Passionfruit 12: Sunset

Nov 03, 2011 13:42

Title: Sunset
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Cheeseburger 5 (trufax), passionfruit 12 (My candle burns at both ends; It will not last the night - Edna St. Vincent Millay), hot fudge (Arelie and Farid right now), malt (ichthusfish's easter egg: Lipstick has a way of leaving/More than just a mark on my sheets/Coloring my senses ( Read more... )

[extra] fresh fruit : raspberries, [extra] malt, [extra] pocky, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] cheeseburger, [challenge] passionfruit

Comments 7

toxic_fairie November 3 2011, 18:28:54 UTC

Very sweet and pretty. Dandelion- and peanut butter-scented air sounds nice. :)

bookblather November 4 2011, 05:09:14 UTC

Thank you! It's a reference to the scenes in Gravity and In the Creases, but I think it works by itself.

sarcasticsra November 3 2011, 19:01:25 UTC

So heartbreaking.

It wasn't the greatest situation, but they really did love each other. That makes it even more wrenching.

Nice job.

bookblather November 4 2011, 05:09:34 UTC

I live to break your hearts in the best possible way.

Thank you.

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bookblather November 4 2011, 05:09:52 UTC

Thank you very much! I strive to make my pockies meaningful. :)

What is the plural of pocky, anyway?

ichthusfish November 4 2011, 04:38:54 UTC

Hmm... nicely written moment. So few of that type moment around these days. Nicely done :)

bookblather November 4 2011, 05:10:01 UTC

Thank you very much!