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new canon [part 1]

Oct 29, 2011 14:07

Pumpkin Pie #14. Costume and Blueberry Yogurt #27. A Misunderstanding
Story : There Are No Small Parts
Rating : G
Word Count : 464

My cast from my '09 failed nano, transplanted into a new world and a new canon. This takes place in the same world as Misadventures (note: Rory, who will be showing up later, is NOT the same character as in ( Read more... )

[challenge] blueberry yogurt, [author] shayna, [challenge] pumpkin pie

Comments 12

luna_moonsilver October 29 2011, 19:41:01 UTC

Ohhh, Fran; she's so adorably awkward <3. I love the interactions between her and Gilda here though; Gilda's clearly looking to put her at ease at the end, so that's nice :D

May I have a piece of candy, please? :3

shayna611 October 29 2011, 20:17:49 UTC

Thanks! :)

Awkward is definitely the word for her. Hopefully she manages to stay more adorable than annoying. Gilda is the one member of the group I'm still kind of struggling with, since her circumstances have changed the most.

CANDY:
an ocean, far too shallow, much too deep
"What If" Emilie Autumn

nathskywalker October 29 2011, 23:00:02 UTC

I think I like Gilda a lot. She is not as I (and probably Fran) thought she would be. And Fran is just wonderfully awkward.

shayna611 October 29 2011, 23:23:31 UTC

I'm glad Fran is working! I just kept going oh god, she won't shut up! and hoping she wouldn't be obnoxious. Gilda is still coming together, her old character was such a victim and I don't want to carry that over.

Thanks! :)

CANDY:
a siren singing gentlemen to sleep
"What If" Emilie Autumn

hi_falootin October 30 2011, 02:00:28 UTC

Aww, I am immediately endeared to Fran. There's a line between obnoxious and endearing, but she's safely on the right side ;) I LOVE this line: It’s something Fran’s noticed people do a lot of around her, once they’ve hit the point where they realize she’s harmless or stupid or something like that, she’s never quite been able to decide.

Sounds like this will be a fun canon! Candy please?

shayna611 October 30 2011, 02:40:22 UTC

Yay! Fran's just a big kid, I think I will have fun with her.

Thanks! :)

CANDY:
the nicest place you never want to go
"What If" Emilie Autumn

roisin_farrell October 31 2011, 18:17:28 UTC

I think I love Fran. She's so cute and awkward and adorable.

shayna611 October 31 2011, 20:09:14 UTC

Thank you! :)

I am having fun with her.

CANDY:
a snowstorm burning
"What If" Emilie Autumn

kay_brooke November 1 2011, 17:45:29 UTC

Oh, I like Fran already. Her awkwardness is painfully familiar. :) I like Gilda trying to put her more at ease.

May I have a piece of candy?

shayna611 November 1 2011, 21:57:16 UTC

Thank you :)

I am the biggest social klutz too, though I tend to just not say anything at all. Fran kind of took over for now, but I will get back to Gilda, hopefully soon.

CANDY:
What if I'm the kindest demon
"What If" Emilie Autumn