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Dark Birds

Oct 26, 2011 21:49

Title: Dark Birds
Main Story: Cryptomancy
Flavors: Pumpkin Pie #7: special effects
Word Count: 1444
Rating: PG-13 (some fairly disturbing imagery)
Summary: Bug and Chaill are summoned to have an audience with Lady Bloodrose. Crazy stuff happens.
Notes: Longer than I like to do them but I think the payoff is worth it. Writing this kind of disturbed the ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

draloreshimare October 27 2011, 03:54:59 UTC

:< No, not Bug!

That imagery was disturbingly, gruesomely ...cool.
Gagging on a non-existent bird now. Spy bird?

toxic_fairie October 27 2011, 04:08:52 UTC

mmmmmm.....could beeeeee? J/J I don't see any reason to be fickle about that. Yes, spy bird. LOL.

I'm glad I disturbed you. I'm hitting like every weird fear I have in this story...eye violence, swallowing a living thing...all I need to do now is like, needles and I'll call it a mission accomplished.

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toxic_fairie October 27 2011, 05:11:54 UTC

Ooooh, I hope I don't sound sadistic, but I'm glad she scares you! She scares me, I have always thought that quiet people are dangerous, and she is usually so quiet...so when she loses it, it kinda freaks me out!

I always appreciate your notes, they are awesome and I love reading what you have to say!! ^^

kay_brooke October 27 2011, 18:35:18 UTC

Oh, the imagery in this is really disturbing. Ugh, swallowing the bird. :( I don't think I even want to know what's going to be done to Bug.

toxic_fairie October 27 2011, 23:02:24 UTC

Thank you!!! I don't want to know what's going to be done to Bug either... :(

rustydragonfly October 28 2011, 22:02:31 UTC

Creeeepy, especially the part about the bird. I'm catching up and now I'm so worried about both of them, but especially Bug. Must read more now...

toxic_fairie October 29 2011, 03:37:59 UTC

Aw well thank you for saying it's creepy XD I have an extreme terror of swallowing something alive so it creeped me out to write it. Thank you for reading <3 <3

bookblather November 1 2011, 01:35:09 UTC

That was some terrifiying imagery. I can't even. Very appropriate for Halloween.

And man, poor Bug. :( That was brave of her, but the end is just... ow. Lady Bloodrose is one scary person.

toxic_fairie November 1 2011, 21:07:13 UTC

Yeah, she says "you're worth too much" but I think she is just really good at knowing what's going to hurt more.

Thank you!!!