Comments | runaway_tales: Pumpkin Pie #7

nothingtoregret in runaway_tales

Oct 14, 2011 23:49

Author: Regret
Rating: G
Challenge: Pumpkin Pie #7 - Special Effects
Extras: Pocky
Word Count: 100
Summary: David mulls over one special effect in particular.
Notes: Drew a complete blank on the theme, so in the end I went for a different kind of, er, effect.

( He sat cross-legged on an outcrop on a rare calm day, watching the sandy plains sway in the heat. )

Comments 2

bookblather October 15 2011, 02:38:30 UTC

Oooh, nice. I especially like the last line; it neatly twists the meaning of the entire story. Well done.

ichthusfish October 15 2011, 03:42:54 UTC

Oooh... interesting. Did he create the heatwave? I like the description in this. Nicely done :)