Kiss in the Dark

[toxic_fairie]

Title: Kiss in the Dark
Main Story: Cryptomancy
Flavors: Pumpkin Pie #1: ghost; Candy Apple #4: Mouth; Pistachio #15: A Kiss
Toppings, Extras: Rainbow Sprinkles (Bug's POV); A Cherry on Top (In the style of T.S. Eliot)
Word Count: 255
Rating: PG
Summary: This is very abstract, but I was trying to write something from Bug's perspective.
Notes: This is

Comments

[rustydragonfly]

Ohh, I love how this all fits together. Aweome work and really atmospheric.

And of course you can do the rest of Pumpkin Pie, the month's barely begun! Look at me. I sound like it's NaNo already.

[toxic_fairie]

Thank you! Hey, no worries, I need all the encouragement I can get ^^ Most appreciated!!!!!!

[draloreshimare]

Oof, I love the rhythm and the imagery here.

[toxic_fairie]

Thanks!!! I love erratic rhyme schemes lately and I had fun trying to pull one off. ^^

[toxic_fairie]

I'm hoping to make her make a little bit more sense soon ^^ thank you so much! I love Bug and I need to make everyone else love her too ^^

[toxic_fairie]

Thank you so much ^^ I'm hoping to catch up...I really like writing Bug and I'm glad at least one or two people like reading her <3

[ichthusfish]

Really good work on this piece. It flows very well and the imagery is strong. Good luck with the rest of Pumpkin Pie. You still have time :D

[toxic_fairie]

Thank you! I always underestimate my capabilities in terms of finishing challenges, but I'm going to give it my all! haha