giving fotd a go again

[shayna611]

Flavor of the Day - 1/23/09 - Sallow
Rating : PG
Timeframe : fall 1260
Word Count : 392
Word of the Day : Sallow - having a sickly, yellowish color

So I went a little off topic... but it was still inspired by the word - had to be Shasa. Anyway, this is just after Rune & Lyssa bring Kairn & Shasa back to the fort.

Comments

[ichthusfish]

Good question Lyssa! Very nicely done. Poor Shasa. I like how Rune is the cook who knows all the remedies :)

[shayna611]

thanks :)

He actually spent a few years as an apprentice to an herbal healer.

[mpiper]

The baby is important, not Shasa.

[shayna611]

indeed, poor Shasa :(

still there is something to be said for making sure he arrives safely, no?

[hi_falootin]

Loved the dialogue between Rune and Lyssa in this piece <3

[shayna611]

thank you :)

[nathskywalker]

I like the dialogue although I'm not completely sure who all the characters are. Shasa is carrying Sethan's baby, right?

[shayna611]

thanks :)

Lyssa & Rune are actually the MC's (who I have been horribly neglecting for quite awhile now) and yes, that's Sethan's baby.

[slysionnachnano]

Aw, poor Shasa and Kairn. Can't blame Lyssa's unease though.

Very nice. It's good to see Lyssa and Rune again *hugs*

[shayna611]

thanks :)

I'm starting to miss them, maybe they will be back some more.

[sylvrilyn]

I don't know why, but something about this piece left me with a really strong hope that everything will be okay (which, of course, makes for less complicated story, but...) Nicely done.

[shayna611]

ah, well... you know it won't... Thanks :)