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smoothiegarten in runaway_tales

TR interlude

Aug 30, 2011 22:21

Authors: Marina and Casey
Story: Taking Root
Challenge: Coconut 3 (where’s the beef?), Milk Chocolate 25 (worry) [Marina]; Blueberry Yogurt 9 (better off), Pomegranate 29 (false hope) [Casey]
Toppings/Extras: Caramel, Chopped Nuts, Sprinkles, Smoothie
Word Count: 1,068
Rating: PG
Summary: [October] Sorin and Peter express fatherly concerns.
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[topping] sprinkles, [extra] smoothie, [topping] chopped nuts, [challenge] coconut, [topping] caramel, [author] casey, [author] marina, [challenge] blueberry yogurt, [challenge] milk chocolate, [challenge] pomegranate

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smoothiegarten September 2 2011, 05:49:55 UTC

Sorin and Russ are pretty much the bromance OTP for Casey's universe (if I am allowed to say these things, although there are some pretty great friendships throughout). He's definitely had it easy up to now. Somewhat spoiled at least in this respect.

Peter's bit has to do with the DW main canon, it's referring to their being in the dragon world for however many days it is now (must plan that out). :P Don't worry about it.

Thanks much! :D

kay_brooke August 31 2011, 19:39:46 UTC

I really like both of these sections, showing the two sets of caring parents. Sorin baffled that his son is acting like a teenager made me laugh. He's not just any teenager, but he still is a teenager, and Russ is right: Sorin is lucky Dean made it to sixteen before he started keeping things from his father.

smoothiegarten September 2 2011, 05:50:42 UTC

Sorin is just a bit spoiled in that regard, yes. Dean's a fairly good kid and pretty close to his dad, so this is definitely new territory for both of them. They'll be okay. Probably. *shifty* Thank you!

bookblather September 1 2011, 04:40:45 UTC

Oh, I love the parallelism here. Very nicely done.

smoothiegarten September 2 2011, 05:50:56 UTC

Thank you very much! :D