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bookblather August 28 2011, 04:53:23 UTC
Man, poor Jay. Coming off of what happened to her in Kandel and then running into this, eesh. Nice job continuing the lesson on your part, though. I like.

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kay_brooke August 29 2011, 17:24:52 UTC
Thanks!

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radomir111 August 28 2011, 06:23:02 UTC
Is there any way I can read what came before this? I like this chapter and want to read more.

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radomir111 August 28 2011, 06:51:58 UTC
Oh, uh...nevermind...I see where you have the story arc.

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kay_brooke August 29 2011, 17:32:46 UTC
Thank you for reading! I see you already found the index. :)

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kay_brooke August 29 2011, 17:35:17 UTC
Thank you!

Jay is pretty disciplined just from her training, but she's always had a short temper (which got her in trouble a lot during her training). So sometimes she just snaps.

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shayna611 August 29 2011, 19:36:34 UTC
poor Jay :(

I love the details and richness you put into your world so much. All the attention to the cultures and the people really makes the place come alive.

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kay_brooke August 31 2011, 19:40:45 UTC
Thank you!

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