Memento Egi

Aug 16, 2011 19:10

 Title: Memento Egi
Story Continuity:  Battle For the Sun
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 19: unfamiliar customs, Papaya 17: talking to myself, Mango 6: you go first
Rating: PG
Word count: 953
Summary: Cyprian and his snowbell arrive in Frutsmoarg, and Cyprian remembers.
Notes: Meme prompt: How Does Your Garden Grow: Cyprian and the snowbell, just after the war ( Read more... )

[challenge] mango, [inactive-author] dark faerie claw, [challenge] papaya, [challenge] blueberry yogurt

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darkfaerieclaw August 17 2011, 01:45:13 UTC
LIKE A GORGEOUS BASKET OF GORGEOUS PFFFFF.

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you like it. <3

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walkwithheroes August 17 2011, 01:00:36 UTC
There is a bittersweet feeling to this that I really love. Brilliantly done.

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darkfaerieclaw August 17 2011, 01:46:37 UTC
Thank you! That's great to hear.

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bookblather August 17 2011, 03:10:47 UTC
Awwwwww. *sniffles* That's so... I don't know, I don't have good words for it, but it's gorgeous and sad and the snowbell sticking with Cyprian is a little heartbreaking, in its own way. Wonderfully done. Just beautiful.

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darkfaerieclaw August 17 2011, 03:27:33 UTC
Thank you. I'm very glad to hear you say that about it. <3

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kay_brooke August 17 2011, 15:52:26 UTC
Lovely. The conversation with the snowbell is so wonderful and sad, and the whole thing flows beautifully.

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darkfaerieclaw August 17 2011, 15:57:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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smoothiegarten August 19 2011, 06:42:26 UTC
Cyprian talking to flowers is my most favorite thing, and this is lovely. I find it interesting and sad that he's entrusting Caius' memory to a snowbell, seeing as flowers aren't that long-lived either. The last line is great, too.

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darkfaerieclaw August 19 2011, 13:37:50 UTC
I find it interesting and sad that he's entrusting Caius' memory to a snowbell, seeing as flowers aren't that long-lived either.

He's entrusting Caius' memory to the snowbell, yes, but also to the kiosk attendant. The attendants are there to listen, remember, and scribe the stories they hear. It's a Frutsmoarg thing. (And also a religion thing, which I didn't get into because it didn't really have a place.)

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.

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