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Icebreaker Piece : Desert Flowers

Aug 12, 2011 00:29

Blueberry Yogurt #4. A Promise and Soft Serve 11/50 : Chocolate #2. Rivalry
with Whipped Cream
Story : Desert Flowers
Rating : PG
Word Count : 3959 ( Read more... )

[topping] whipped cream, [challenge] blueberry yogurt, [author] shayna, [challenge] soft serve : 50

Comments 7

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shayna611 August 12 2011, 05:36:19 UTC

Thank you so very much! :) You know, it totally made my night when you told me that without knowing it was me you were talking about! There are a few old pieces from the world, but I really would like to bring it back, so I will start giving it some more thought.

jeha87 August 12 2011, 07:48:51 UTC

Wow! Reading, I became totally immersed in this world, how Chandra and Narda's friendship, and their and Tahj's childhood innocence, are breaking apart as they mature and things aren't the way they expected (poor Tahj and Narda...). I hope you continue it as well!

shayna611 August 12 2011, 14:39:45 UTC

Thank you! :)

smoothiegarten August 12 2011, 21:28:36 UTC

I think you should continue it! I really liked the details of the world you came up with and can sympathize with the characters so much. It's a terrible situation for everyone. I would love to see more.

shayna611 August 12 2011, 22:08:14 UTC

Thanks! I will try. I would also still like to do something with that trip around the world story and Sly and I were talking about bringing back Misadventures. Hopefully I can find some attention to give them, I am so bad about keeping new projects going.

bookblather August 14 2011, 00:38:17 UTC

The world here is SO COOL. I mean, just amazing. Brilliantly done on the worldbuilding, and I can't wait to see what happens to these characters.

shayna611 August 14 2011, 02:13:18 UTC

thank you very much! :)

I will try my best to continue it.