Dark Chocolate 17: Dirt and Flies

[memirra]

Title: Dirt and Flies
Author: Memirra
Challenge: Dark Chocolate # 17 (mania)
Toppings/Extras: Whipped Cream, Hot Fudge, Rainbow Sprinkles, Pocky Chain
Story: [No name as of yet]
Word Count: 294
Rating: PG
Summary: Snippets of Resmon's childhood/early teen life.
Notes: A few drabbles about moments in the childhood of a rather sociopathic minor doctor

Comments

[lady_macbeth_19]

Oh wow, the last line is very powerful there! I really like the way, through three quick scene, you've given us a very clear insight on the character :P Well done!
XxLil

[memirra]

Thank you! :) I'm happy his personality showed well in something so short. ^^

[kaitygirl88]

I agree, that last line was eery and oh so good. Resmon is the perfect example of why sociopaths can be really scary. The second pocky was the one that really got to me even though it was the least violent. Great job!

[memirra]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you. :D

[bookblather]

Brrr, that is a creepy young man. Some really excellent metaphors and language on your part, though!

[memirra]

Yes, very creepy indeed, but fun to write for nonetheless. Thank you very much. :)