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kaitygirl88 in runaway_tales

Bits and Pieces of Whipped Cream

Aug 09, 2011 19:38

Story: Blaze Mafia Family
Title: Why Wait?
Prompts: Pistachio #28: waiting, Heavenly Hash #15: holier than thou + whipped cream
Rating: PG
Words: 154
Summary: This is gratuitous kid-Firebird silliness. It should come as no surprise that Firebird is hell on waiting rooms. She’s eight here.

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[challenge] green cheese, [topping] whipped cream, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [challenge] heavenly hash, [challenge] pistachio

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bitty1721 August 10 2011, 01:28:18 UTC

OMG...these are all good...but I have to say I love the second piece the most. Gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.

kaitygirl88 August 12 2011, 01:25:03 UTC

Yeah, Atlas with a baby is just stuffed to the brim with good feelings. XD Thanks for reading!

bookblather August 10 2011, 04:09:38 UTC

Man, Atlas is such a sucker for his kids. That's pretty much what I took away from all of these, but especially that last one-- the lengths a parent, or an uncle, will go to to keep a child safe and alive can be terrifying. Well done.

kaitygirl88 August 12 2011, 01:25:38 UTC

Yep, that's pretty much the moral of this story. XD Atlas would do anything for his kids, and he does mean that literally. Thanks for reading!

roisin_farrell August 10 2011, 18:04:15 UTC

The first two were all sweet and cute and awww and then that last one...brrr. Creepy. I am so glad Edan did not get his heart that way.

kaitygirl88 August 12 2011, 01:26:40 UTC

lol, yeah they're all whipped creams so I bundled these three together, but the content sure isn't the same! No, Edan got his heart through normal channels, but only because that heart became available first. It's one of those dark Blaze moments that they don't discuss.

Thanks for reading!

nathskywalker August 27 2011, 13:23:17 UTC

Firebird is spoiled as hell :P

The last one was very disturbing. I'm still trying to recover from that. Somehow, killing babies is just too fucked up for me but I understand where it's coming from.

kaitygirl88 August 28 2011, 17:05:42 UTC

Firebird's totally a brat! Atlas loves spoiling her. XD

That Doc piece was the first piece I've ever written for the Blazes that left me shaken afterwards. Doc has always made me feel squicky, but the whole "I'm qualified to work on infants" made me wonder what the hell is coming out of my brain!

Thanks for reading. :)

luna_moonsilver September 29 2011, 21:42:38 UTC

Haha, I love Firebird in the first one; of course she shouldn't have to wait ;D and the second piece is lovely - though the bit about Paloma threatening Atlas did make me laugh. The third one is kind of creepy but at the same time I think it fits with the others (and actually all the pieces of yours I've read so far) because it's all about how far they'll go for each other and that family is the most important thing.

Excellent! :D

kaitygirl88 September 30 2011, 20:15:13 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, for the Blazes life is very simple. There's Family and everyone else. Everyone else is just a tool to get what the Family needs. It's a screwed up way of life but you gotta admit that when you're on the receiving end of all that love, life is pretty good. ;)