Blue Raspberry 29, Pistachio 23: Dealing

[bookblather]

Title: Dealing
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Blue raspberry 29 (front row seat), pistachio 23 (recuperating), malt (PFAH: Lars : slip of the tongue), brownie

Comments

[five_steps_back]

Have I ever mentioned that I'm extremely jealous of how well you manage group scenes? This is a really well written piece, and I love how you have five different little stories that still all manage to make one big one. These characters are love. <3

[bookblather]

The trick is never to write more then two characters talking to each other at the same time. Three, tops.

Thank you very much! <33

[bookblather]

Russell may be saying my words there. *shifty eyes* Thank you so much for your compliments! Yes, Danny sews, and quite well, too.

Thank you!

[sarcasticsra]

This is awesome. I love how you show each of them, and how well each section fits together to make the story as a whole. Good on Lars for realizing Russell was right in the end, and I say that as a fellow recovering perfectionist. Sometimes you just have to let things go a little.

Great job!

[bookblather]

Yup. Some days you just gotta say "good enough." Thank you!

[smoothiegarten]

:D This is an awesome piece! I love how each conversation is about Lars but also about separate things at the same time. Penny and Jay are SO CUTE. <3 And Danny sews! That was unexpected but her explanation makes a lot of sense. I'm glad Lars decided to let everyone go at the end, as well. He'll be happier with the video as a result.

[bookblather]

Penny and Jay are AWESOME. And yes, Danny sews. :D Thank you very much! He will be happier in the end.