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Cranberry with Malt

Jul 17, 2011 15:52

Author: Nikki
Challenge: Cranberry #14 (Death)
Toppings/Extras: Malt ("Bye, bye, bye, all this dog-eared innocence. I can't pretend that I can tell you what is going to happen next or how to be. But you have no idea about me. Do you?" - The Graveyard Near the House, Airborne Toxic Event)
Word Count: 593
Rating: PG
Notes: Takes place in October 2016. ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] nikki, [extra] malt, [challenge] cranberry

Comments 8

very good anonymous July 17 2011, 21:03:59 UTC

logically

Re: very good five_steps_back July 17 2011, 21:14:26 UTC

Thank you. Figuratively.

subluxate July 17 2011, 22:38:15 UTC

ANGIE, making this be WRITTEN. At least you don't have to do so again?

Sadness, though. Just...sad.

five_steps_back July 17 2011, 23:20:26 UTC

I told her that if she ever suggested doing a cookie crumbs of this, I'd disown her and make her live in YOUR head, so. NO, I DON'T EVER HAVE TO DO THIS AGAIN.

Srsly, so not happy at her rn.

bookblather July 18 2011, 05:36:12 UTC

...well, that broke my heart good and proper. It was the ending, where Rayne saw her healthy and strong again, that really got me. Fabulous, and heartbreaking.

kay_brooke July 18 2011, 18:57:57 UTC

Lovely and heartbreaking. I like the glimpses of strong Angie that Rayne gets, showing that the Angie she knew is still in there even at the end.

bella_feather July 19 2011, 00:14:45 UTC

This is so heartbreaking and so well written. Wonderful job!