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Jan 18, 2009 00:41

Rocky Road #15. Treetops with Malt
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1267
Word Count : 348
Malt Prompt : Prompta from the Hat 01/09 : Treetops - Mara - Rules of the Game

( because I know about these things )

[challenge] rocky road, [extra] malt, [author] shayna

Comments 12

slysionnachnano January 18 2009, 06:48:58 UTC

What?! Squirrels do too have hands =P. The minds of six year olds...

Absolutely adorable. I love how you write for young Mara and...young town friend. Made me grin.

shayna611 January 18 2009, 06:52:00 UTC

yeah, I suppose they might... Gwen seems to think most things are somewhat humanoid (but the she's not even 3 yet)

thanks :)

kage_ankoku January 18 2009, 07:16:30 UTC

I love six-year-olds. Their logic always makes me laugh. Very cute piece! I like how Mara and her friend interact.

shayna611 January 18 2009, 15:21:36 UTC

yeah, kids have the goofiest logic, and they're always so sure it's right (ask my 2-year-old who knows everything). Thanks :)

hi_falootin January 18 2009, 07:22:06 UTC

Awww! Mara will never let the other girl be the knight, huh? I like how you uses Ski's POV for this :)

shayna611 January 18 2009, 15:20:41 UTC

thank you :)

she did say maybe next time... ;)

ichthusfish January 19 2009, 22:36:30 UTC

That was so cute! I love the way young children's brains work. This is just nicely spot on :)

shayna611 January 19 2009, 22:48:09 UTC

thank you :)

sylvrilyn February 11 2009, 20:45:08 UTC

I've probably said it before, but I'll say it again. You write children so well! :)

shayna611 February 11 2009, 20:58:42 UTC

lots of experience to work with... Thanks! :)