Pomegranate 22

[niee87]

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, During NIEE
Challenges: Pomegranate 22 (priorities)
Toppings & Extras: Sprinkles, Cherry (for the obvious), Malt (Egg from Kaitygirl: "I love this moment so much, I want to have sex with it." Dr. Cox from Scrubs.), Pocky
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bri proves he’s fully

Comments

[nathskywalker]

yay! you did write something. And I get to comment on the new laptop with the weird keyboard I'm not used to yet XD

I like that this just leads up to the smut, there are hints of it, all the description but you dodged what you didn't want to write. I do that a lot too ;)

[niee87]

I did! And yay new laptop?

Hehe, yeah, total dodge, I will admit, but hey, step closer so maybe next time I'll go all the way :P

[rustydragonfly]

I'm going to agree, there's often just as much effectiveness in leading in and giving brief descriptions as there is in explicit descriptions. I really like this!

[niee87]

Thanks! I'm glad you do :D Also, so glad it worked!

[theoryoferin]

great job for something you didn't want to write! ;]

[niee87]

Haha, thanks! Nath's a good bad influence ;)

[ichthusfish]

Heehee! Awesome! This is very effective and leaves the way open for so much more... like a follow on piece ;)

[niee87]

Haha, maybe next time I'm feeling brave I'll go further :P In the meantime, I'm glad it works as is too! Thanks :D