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Pistachio #3

Jun 23, 2011 02:21

Author: JayElleBee
Challenge: Pistachio #3 (Ceremony)
Extra: N/A
Topping: N/A
Rating: PG
Word Count: 550
Story Title: Blacklight City
Summary: Max needs everything to be just right. Jack thinks he's a freak.

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[challenge] pistachio

Comments 3

ichthusfish June 23 2011, 23:20:16 UTC

Aww! Kind of sweet in a sad way. There is something of a 'child locked in a man's body' sense to Jack that's reinforced by the bear and sleeping in a closet. The ritualness of this made me think of Aspergers... Hopefully he won't have to use that knife. I'm not sure how he'd deal with it. Nicely done :)

ichthusfish June 23 2011, 23:21:10 UTC

Max, even... not Jack *is asleep*

jayellebee June 24 2011, 17:32:35 UTC

Yes, Max's childishness is something of a defense mechanism I think. c: I never considered Aspergers though. Then again he is still in development. :D Thanks for giving me something to think about and thanks for the comment. <3