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dani_california in runaway_tales

Fudge Ripple and Mocha with Peaches, Blueberries, Pineapple, and Whipped Cream

May 08, 2011 23:39

Author: Nikki
Challenge: Fudge Ripple #26 (anguish), Mocha #10 (mind your own business)
Toppings/Extras: Whipped Cream (Angie is 17), Pineapple (We just want our hermitry to stay and our coffee to go.), Peaches (A phone call could inform you of difficulties at home that require that you deal with them right away, Taurus.), Blueberries (Is there a ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] nikki, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [challenge] fudge ripple, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries, [challenge] mocha

Comments 7

bookblather May 9 2011, 04:46:56 UTC

Well, that was a punch in the gut. The last line in particular. Argh. I mean, Hannah is not right about everything, but I think Angie needed to hear some of what she said, even if she couldn't listen, but still, OW. Brilliant job.

dani_california May 9 2011, 14:14:30 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, Hannah's actions are sort of understandable, imo, but still mostly incorrect.

Thanks for reading!

lintelsoups May 9 2011, 10:47:23 UTC

Oh man, I love all this angst.

dani_california May 9 2011, 14:13:34 UTC

Angie is excellent for angst, just because the majority of her life sucked.

Thanks for reading!

kay_brooke May 9 2011, 14:26:25 UTC

Ouch. The emotions in this are painful. I hope Angie is able to find some peace someday.

dani_california May 9 2011, 14:27:48 UTC

She does, in a way. She never really makes peace with her sister, but she is mostly happy near the end of her life, which unfortunately comes much sooner than it should have.

Thanks for reading!

smoothiegarten May 10 2011, 04:37:27 UTC

Oh, God, poor Angie. :( And Sarah and Hannah, too. This is just all-around awful.