Vinegar 6, Pistachio 3: Homecoming

May 07, 2011 17:01

Title: Homecoming
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Vinegar 6 (do not operate machinery), pistachio 3 (ceremony), malt (PFAH: Summer, Ivy, Aaron, Danny : I don't think the microwave works like that), caramel ( Read more... )

[challenge] vinegar, [extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [challenge] pistachio, [inactive-author] bookblather

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dani_california May 7 2011, 21:08:58 UTC
The door burst open, Danny flew inwards, and said, desperately, "Hide me."

LOL, Danny, ILU so much.

I am very much on Summer's side, here. Book in the kitchen > party.

Also, Aaron's "Don't wanna." made me giggle as well.

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bookblather May 8 2011, 04:17:28 UTC
Aaron had to. Ivy baited him. HE HAD TO. Also, Danny is awesome. And I am also with Summer but the party seems to have found her anyway so oh well.

Thanks!

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bookblather May 8 2011, 04:18:11 UTC
Aaron occasionally suffers lapses in judgment when it comes to the angelicness of his kids. XD Although it should be said that this one is really Andy's fault. And yeah, Summer is not the most party-prone of people, but she does love having her family with her.

Thank you!

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sarcasticsra May 8 2011, 01:31:56 UTC
LOL, Danny's entrance. Love it. I also love them all trickling into the kitchen, one by one. Excellent.

This is so sweet, truly. Awesome job!

(Also, usually I am all on board with the idea that books > parties, but given that it's this crowd? I think I'd want to hang out. XD)

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bookblather May 8 2011, 04:19:16 UTC
That's true, but Summer is feeling mildly antisocial at the moment, and can you really blame her? I mean, given that Andy is doing his best to explode the microwave...

Thanks!

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smoothiegarten May 9 2011, 00:58:42 UTC
:D This is BEAUTIFUL. Poor Danny. Also, I love how Ivy's just "screw it" about the Peeps thing and leaves it to the owner of the microwave. So do not blame Summer for beating a strategic retreat, either.

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bookblather May 9 2011, 03:58:22 UTC
Ivy has had it with her kids today. Frankly, I can't blame her, or Summer. XD Thanks!

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niee87 May 10 2011, 02:11:02 UTC
This is adorable. Danny's terror and Summer's intelligence (as usual) with hiding, Lars's attempts at persuasion, Aaron's somewhat cluelessness :D This is brilliant in its general simplicity. Loved it! Would love to see the kids' POV of all this :P

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bookblather May 10 2011, 03:55:17 UTC
Summer is very smart when it comes to her family, but then she's used to them. XD Thank you! Might do the kids later. :D

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