blueberry cheesecake, grapefruit and rocky road with malt and whipped cream

Apr 05, 2011 17:30

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Due Date
Rating: G
Challenge: Rocky Road #8: attic, Grapefruit #16: due date, Blueberry Cheesecake #11: high hopes
Toppings/Extras: whipped cream, malt
Wordcount: 349
Summary: Cooper Braun, Francis Gower and family.
Notes: Cooper is eleven. Francis is fourteen. Ciro is about to be born! And use of ‘attic ( Read more... )

[challenge] rocky road, [extra] malt, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] grapefruit, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] blueberry cheesecake

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nathskywalker April 5 2011, 16:53:40 UTC
This is cute and at the same time it shows so well why Cooper, Francis and the others care so much about Ciro. He would have meant a lot to them hadn't Christina had problems giving birth before but I think that issue adds to how special Ciro becomes to all of them. They are so nervous and Francis seems to be all negative and worried about it while Cooper prefers to think about all the great stuff they'll be able to do with the baby.

cute chicks! May I have the egg that is half-covered by the fluffy chick on the left?

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ninablues April 5 2011, 17:18:30 UTC
Yeah, it hilights the big difference between Cooper and Francis I think-- one's an optimist and the other's more of a pessimist. Thanks!

Here's your prompt!

BUZZ: Right now, poised at the edge of the galaxy, Emperor Zurg has been secretly building a weapon with the destructive capacity to annihilate an entire planet! I alone have information that reveals this weapon's only weakness. And you, my friend, are responsible for delaying my rendezvous with Star Command!
WOODY: You! Are! A! Toy!

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roisin_farrell April 5 2011, 17:07:51 UTC
This is very sweet and I love Cooper's enthusiasm about stealing the baby presents and having the baby sleep with them.

Can I have the egg on the right?

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ninablues April 5 2011, 17:31:52 UTC
Cooper's a big ol' softy. :') Thanks!

Your prompt--
SID: "Extremely dangerous... keep out of reach of children..." Cool! What am I gonna blow?
(Toy Story)

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ninablues April 5 2011, 19:44:14 UTC
Little Ciro becomes a much-loved member of the family. Almost too much so, really, but I forgive him being a bit spoilt because he's so cute. XD

Prompt for you!
WOODY: Buzz, you've got wings! You glow in the dark! You talk! Your helmet does that, that... whoosh thing! You are a cool toy! ...as a matter of fact, you're too cool.

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niee87 April 5 2011, 19:41:24 UTC
Aw, these two are rather cute. I love the excitement underlying all of this. Cooper's so little in here and it's obvious to hear in his voice! Nicely done!

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ninablues April 5 2011, 19:45:36 UTC
Thank you! I've left Cooper, Francis and co. for so long that I'm going to make a conscious effort to write more of them. XD Thanks!

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smoothiegarten April 6 2011, 19:07:24 UTC
CHICKS <3 astoundingly appropriate for this story.

Poor Francis, but he is being very patient with Cooper's enthusiasm. I hope the baby will be born safely!

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