Comments | runaway_tales: Mocha #2, Fudge Ripple #9, Vanilla #28, w/ Nuts

dani_california in runaway_tales

Mocha #2, Fudge Ripple #9, Vanilla #28, w/ Nuts - Sleeping Is No Mean Art

Mar 29, 2011 15:13

Author: Nikki
Challenge: Mocha #2 (a song stuck in my head), Fudge Ripple #9 (distraction), Vanilla #28 (mail/letter/package)
Toppings/Extras: Chopped Nuts (Butterfly Effect AU)
Word Count: 864
Rating: PG
Notes: Takes place in September 2034. The title of this is Sleeping Is No Mean Art. The song that Naomi sings is called Asleep by The Smiths.
Story: ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] nikki, [topping] chopped nuts, [challenge] fudge ripple, [challenge] mocha, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 8

master_taters March 29 2011, 20:51:12 UTC

For some reason I thought of yOu when she said " just let me get my laptop" cuz to bring that damn thing everywhere. Lol

dani_california March 30 2011, 02:48:14 UTC

Well now you know why I bring it everywhere, haha.

Thanks for reading!

bookblather March 31 2011, 03:46:42 UTC

Awwwww. This is so sweet! Lovly job.

dani_california March 31 2011, 04:15:09 UTC

I love them together. :D

Thanks for reading!

kay_brooke March 31 2011, 17:40:24 UTC

Oh, that is really, really sweet. I love the kind of awkward singing at the end.

dani_california April 2 2011, 04:49:59 UTC

Thank you! The singing at the end was the first thing I thought of for this piece.

Thanks for reading!

smoothiegarten April 2 2011, 03:50:30 UTC

Awww, Naomi. Love the lollipop detail and her offering to sing to Camille. I hope they both got a little comfort out of the other's company, anyway.

dani_california April 2 2011, 04:51:24 UTC

I think this was the start of a mutual attraction between them, actually. :D

Thanks for reading! I'm happy you noticed the lollipop detail, since Naomi's love of candy is maybe my favorite thing about her.