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ninablues in runaway_tales

flavour of the day

Mar 27, 2011 01:38

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Foundations
Rating: G
Challenge: FOTD: verisimilitude
Toppings/Extras: none
Wordcount: 406
Summary: Victor Blackledge tries to see what is real, not what was once real.
Notes: Inspired partly by this song… oh dear. I’m sorry, Victor. XD Verisimilitude: The appearance of truth; the quality of seeming to ( Read more... )

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bookblather March 27 2011, 03:25:03 UTC

Awwww, Victor. That line about living memories is so cool, and oh, Robyn, trying so hard to lighten them just a little. He'll always have that memory too. Good job, and very sweet.

ninablues March 27 2011, 09:58:30 UTC

The balance of good/bad memories is being slowly pushed from bad to good. Thanks!

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ninablues March 27 2011, 09:59:50 UTC

Hahaha, yeahh. My Little Pony is pretty much as far from Victor as one can get so I found it funny that the song made me think of this situation. XD Thanks!

smoothiegarten March 27 2011, 04:14:34 UTC

:D Bless Robin a million times over, trying to give him a good memory of this horrible place. I hope that'll be the first thing he thinks of when he remembers it in future.

ninablues March 27 2011, 10:00:32 UTC

So do I! XD Robyn is Victor's hero, big time. Thanks!

ellis12 March 27 2011, 06:59:51 UTC

Oh dear, poor Victor! I loved the way in which the haunting memories of the past and the present seem to juxtapose in this piece. And I loved Robyn even more at the end ;)

ninablues March 27 2011, 10:01:32 UTC

That sort of thing happens a lot to Victor because of his special ability, i.e. perfect eidic memory, which screws with his head a lot. Thanks!

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ninablues March 27 2011, 12:02:27 UTC

You may kiss the metaphor! :D Victor has a very interesting mind. Thanks!