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FOTD, Pistachio 8: Mothering

Mar 08, 2011 23:03

Title: Mothering
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: FOTD (puckish: whimsical; mischievous; impish), pistachio 8 (storytelling), malt (PFAH : Olivia and a child), pocky chain, whipped cream (half of them), caramel (the other half), hot fudge (oh, Yvonne), cherry (pocky duos), fresh strawberries (Under the Horse Chestnut Tree, Mary ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : strawberries, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] pocky chain, [challenge] pistachio, [topping] cherry, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 17

sarcasticsra March 9 2011, 04:31:56 UTC

Oh, this is awesome. I love the last set the most, I think, because I love Summer figuring things out and being confident and awesome, and yay, OT3!

bookblather March 10 2011, 05:29:01 UTC

I really need to get more of the Caramel Project done, because once she's finished having this minibreakdown she gets kind of scarily awesome. Thank you!

(OT3 ftw.)

walkwithheroes March 9 2011, 04:51:38 UTC

I love pieces like this. This one is really awesome and just so true to life. I love your characters in this piece. Awesome job!

bookblather March 10 2011, 05:29:21 UTC

Thank you very much! It was definitely fun to write and plan out.

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bookblather March 10 2011, 05:29:47 UTC

Hah, no one likes Yvonne. XD Thank you! I like writing about inheritence in all its strange and interesting meanings.

ninablues March 9 2011, 12:39:28 UTC

There are so many wonderful glimpses here, I don't think I could possibly choose a favourite! These in particular struck me as so real, too.

Also, I had no idea Summer's future family was based on a trio! I don't know if this is the reveal of if I've had massive reading fail, but her response to his question is brilliant and Thomas seems like an awesome kid. :D

bookblather March 10 2011, 05:30:49 UTC

This is the first time I've been explicit about the OT3. There have been sneaky hints dropped before, but they were very sneaky, so. Thomas is an awesome kid. :D

Thank you!

niee87 March 9 2011, 14:28:42 UTC

These are great! I love the double pocky chain thing :D I like the echo in each pair too - they're so sweet! Well, except Yvonne's really. I love them and I agree with Nina a lot about how REAL they feel. Also, VERY curious about Summer's future with the fathers!

bookblather March 10 2011, 05:31:32 UTC

There's a reason Yvonne gets her own warning. The echo was definitely something I was working for, and don't worry, Summer's future will become clear. :D

Thanks for reading!