Comments | runaway_tales: a chocolate milkshake with with malt and a brownie!

ninablues in runaway_tales

a chocolate milkshake with with malt and a brownie!

Feb 13, 2011 20:52

Story: Misfits
Title: Last Resort
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Chocolate #27: determination
Toppings/Extras: malt, milkshake, brownie
Wordcount: 7,215
Summary: A mission in the town of Lindos becomes unexpectedly interesting.
Notes: Misfits belongs to the fantastic Nathalia! This is a little cracky and, as always, I seem to have managed to exaggerate ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [extra] brownie, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] chocolate, [extra] milkshake

Comments 4

nathskywalker February 13 2011, 21:45:00 UTC

This is amazing. The characters are perfect, Wes not wanting to alert Hobbie, and the action is the best Misfits action ever. The description of Lindos was great and the entire town working for Lasky. That reminded me of Springfield in GI Joe and Genosha, maybe the Prisoner. The old lady made me laugh and oh this was just such a great read and I'm not very coherent about it right now. I'll have to reread it but I love it.

Thanks so much!

ninablues February 13 2011, 21:58:20 UTC

No problem! Thanks for letting me play with your characters. It was a lot of fun, which is probably why I got totally carried away! The characters are the best part anyway and they all belong to you. :D

smoothiegarten February 14 2011, 02:08:30 UTC

AHAHAHAHA This is awesome. The fact that the whole town went after them and the Vegan Meat reference and Shania being badass and Wes not wanting to call Hobbie...so amazing. I love it. You did a great job!

ninablues February 14 2011, 08:13:54 UTC

Well done on reading it all! I ended up going totally overboard just to set up that final scene. That was the point of all of it. XD And of course I had to make a reference to Vegan Meat!

Thank you, and credit for the awesome people goes to Nathalia. :D